Young Adult Novel - Revision

 I am revising a young adult novel I wrote years ago. To make sure the reader is satisfied by the answers to these questions, above the heading Chapter One, I have written Who, What, When, Why, Where and How. I have faith in the novel which is worth my time and energy.

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